20,090 words and counting (+sneak peek)!(Mostly, this journal is to mess with the CSS skins that we can add for a limited time, though.)
BUT for all of you who are interested, here's one of my favorite scenes that I've written in my story so far. =] First time Elyth sees Nero drunk, lawl.
(Warning: COMPLETELY unedited!)
“Wha’s in th’ bags?” he asked, his voice slightly slurred.
Elyth frowned, wondering what had gotten into him. She spat out her toothpaste, rinsed the brush, and walked into the other room. Nero was swaying slightly on his feet and even from almost across the room she could smell the alcohol. “Are you drunk?”
Nero shook his head, the motion almost causing him to fall over. “Wha’s in th’ bags?” he asked again as he stumbled over to them and began fumbling with the knots.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” Elyth told him. She grabbed his hands to stop him from getting into the bags.
He looked up at her. “Your hair’s wet,” he mumbled. “D’you take a shower?” He frowned. “There’s a- there’s a body in the shower! How’d you take a shower?”
“I think you need to go to bed,” Elyth said firmly.
Nero shook his head again. “D’you eat the body?” he asked. His eyes widened, almost comically, and he asked in a whispered voice, “Is the body in the bags?”
“I’ll eat you if you don’t cooperate,” Elyth muttered. She stood up, pulling up with her. Nero swayed unsteadily on his feet and leaned against her for support. “Come on, into the bed with you.”
She led him across the room to the bed and dumped him on top of it. He tried to kick off his shoes, but failed miserably, so with another sigh of annoyance Elyth took off his sneakers for him. As an afterthought, she removed his knife from where she knew it was hidden at his side. Nero was already asleep at this point and snoring loudly, so Elyth just grabbed the top blanket and threw it haphazardly over him.
She locked the door to their motel room again, cleaned up the mess Nero had made in the short time he had been back, and sat down in one of the empty chairs to wait for him to wake up. “This was not in my job description,” she muttered angrily. “God damn it, Nero, you have better have a damn good explanation for this.”
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*noms*
Hope school and field hockey are going well for you ♥
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Make the change, it's worth a try.
What's broken can be fixed tonight ♫
Everything is going well.
(...-needs to sign onto MSN more-
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"Now with even more spectacular dementia!"
-Oh My Gods
Many thanks to ~Xiki for making me my epically awesome icon!
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"She's a little pilot in my mind, singin' songs of love to pass the time"
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Make the change, it's worth a try.
What's broken can be fixed tonight ♫
Sorry for not being around. D=
I'll try to get on MSN tomorrow, or later tonight. <33
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"Now with even more spectacular dementia!"
-Oh My Gods
Many thanks to ~Xiki for making me my epically awesome icon!
You excited for field hockey. I can bring your goalie gear stuff to the try outs.
And I was actually just about to ask you about the gear, lol. Thanks!
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"Now with even more spectacular dementia!"
-Oh My Gods
Many thanks to ~Xiki for making me my epically awesome icon!
your welcome
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*bother*
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